Full Script Analysis – 2 Hour Movies

The supreme notes package for getting vital, helpful feedback on your script as well as page notes based on years of experience. Includes thorough general notes covering story/structure, character, dialog, marketability and notation of any spelling or formatting errors as well as specific page-by-page, detailed notes on issues with the script and suggestions on addressing them. Length varies, but typically 8 – 12 pages.

Revisions

1st Set of Notes $350.00 2nd Set of Notes $300.00 Subsequent Notes $250.00

Full Script Analysis – Television Pilots

Designed to help you get your pilot in the best shape possible, with the understanding that a great pilot is completely different than a great movie. Includes thorough general notes covering story/structure, character, dialog, marketability and notation of any spelling or formatting errors as well as specific page-by-page, detailed notes on issues with the script and suggestions on addressing them. Length varies, but typically 6 – 10 pages.

Revisions - TV Pilots

1st Set of Notes $150.00 Subsequent Notes $100.00

Although not as detailed as full analysis, this set of notes is geared for those who want to look at their script in broader terms. Includes thorough general notes covering story/structure, character, dialog and marketability as well as general suggestions for improvement detailed notes on issues with the script and suggestions on addressing them. Usually 4 – 8 pages.

If you’re just looking for some general comments that will help you know what direction to take your next draft, these notes are designed for you. They’ll address the same categories as a general analysis, but in less specific details. Usually 2 – 5 pages.

Great as a sales tool or a way to check and see if a reader will see your script the same way you do. Includes a logline, a short paragraph that can also be used in a pitch letter, a chart ranking the script in key areas, a 1 – 2 page synopsis and 1 -2 pages of general notes.

If you have a book you’d like to pitch as a movie, coverage of the book will be vital to pitching. Getting a well-written synopsis of the book that makes the potential movie clear to the reader can be the difference between a sale or not. Plus 1 -2 pages of general comments that detail the book’s high points. Length varies by book.

If you just need a synopsis to submit to an agent, or to check and see if your script tells the story you mean it to, this will be a terrific guide. 1-3 pages.

If you’re just looking for feedback on a particular element of the script, such as story structure or dialog, customized services are available. This would include a thorough set of notes covering your specific topic. Usually 2-5 pages long.